Odd.
There is only one speaker in this piece. Me. Questions. No answer. Or... do you feel the fear of the answer? Black to white. Alone. Shining light.
I believe if you fallow the thoughts that led you to this poem, you will find the answers to the questions it poses. And if you fear that you cannot hold the stars in your hands, hold them in your eyes.
really intellegent layout!! very nice. also, the 'are we alone' text is multiplied so it looks its answering its own question. no. haha. also smart to make that the most prevalent of phrases. i like!
Interesting concept to the theme -- enjoying the clean look of the light at the end of the tunnel; However I don't believe this to be your strongest Typographic piece -- mainly because I find some awkwardness in the lighting of the text and that of the overhead "well opening" and that of the text. I'd almost imagine the gradient of the words to be opposite, and darker at the edges to have that similar "concave" feel - despite that the last sentence "are we alone" is the crux of all the statements and deserves focus -- I believe that a sudden darkening in the last sentence can likewise strengthen it however.
Good job.
It's visually grabbing.
I believe if you fallow the thoughts that led you to this poem, you will find the answers to the questions it poses. And if you fear that you cannot hold the stars in your hands, hold them in your eyes.
Sláinte,
CorvidCam
[god the abyss.]