I'm doing a Typography module at the minute, and I'm supposed to be quite 'advanced' in my class, and I'm no where near coming up with ideas that look like this. Where do you start? I'm lacking motivation on all fronts. Hmmpf
Is this is based on the ability of headphones to tangle themselves while out of site no matter how neatly you wrap them up?
Irrespective of that, i like the design, it's very dynamic (not sure it says festivity tho.)
i like the phrase "oh no, there goes the funk again..." that's great...did you ever think about adding color? it looks good in black and white, but i'd be curious to see this in color as well. (i'm pretty sure i'd prefer it in black and white, but i still think it's be worth playing with).
what i really like is how you have head phones everywhere except by "oh no"...i like how you put a jack by that instead, it's subtle and i like that. great work cutting the squiggles off on the right and left side, that's also a nice touch.
another thing is the line breaks, you make that work well so that was good to add in too, instead of having a bunch of solid lines. great work!
Your work brings me so much pleasure, just looking at it brings a smile on my face and makes my brain spin.. The musical "red line" works well for this piece and you found the right balance physical images and the playful part.
The middle portion sort of reminded me of an eye. Also, I like the small details, like the little plug in thingy [I swear I know what it's called] next to the Oh no, and the other ones on that same side of the page. It gives off a feeling of being plugged in and/or wired.
ha, i really like that...i like how you made it almost like an explosion of some sort
i also like how you actually wrote "oh no, there goes the funk again" but with no spaces in between. the ear phones was a nice touch, and i like the fact that there are no bright colors involved. nicely done.