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Another Rambling.
Slowly walking down the hall
No one with me
Near me at all
But just think, the possibilities.
      Of random chance.
           Of happenstance.
The people we meet, the people we don't.
The people we see, the people we won't.

Life is painfully confusing that way.
Stand-up amusing that way.

People standing in a line.
Who of them are headed home?
   How many people will I have known. . .
When this is all over and done with.
Who will have understood me by the time
By the time my time
                 your time
                  our time
By the time my time is through.
Will it have been her or her or him or you?

Unid
Rambling in the Skies
------

I may design a plane one day.

I may switch majors anyway.

The clouds bustling, dark cotten blanket filling the earth poured.
Poured blood on the walls poured light to the sky and never let the wings even wobble.
Totter and wiggle.
Weak and frail.
Masters,
Humans.

Food chain devolution.
Scopes, hopes, antelopes.
Mango sky and soft rock red,
I found my friends they're in my head.
Moonlight rising every night and.
Some are right and.
Everyone's wrong.

Laptop.
Lap dance. Licks and tickles, shits and giggles.
Cussing for the first time, dreaming for the last time.
I wonder what it'd be like to live out in the sky. Abo

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We were assigned to write an emulation poem of June Jordan or Mohja Kahf. A poem came out of it, and this came last night.

[Don't just hold my hand. Feel my heartbeat.]
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~007-BloodyAlaizabel Sep 17, 2007
I love how you threw in the extra words and jumbled the meaning of the overused ones. It's amazing. Simply amazing.
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~tripping-on-this May 12, 2007
oh my god!!! i can't even tell you... :love::heart::+fav::thumbsup:
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~Lilabelle Apr 22, 2007   Digital Artist
It feels...like the 'voice' is trying to convince themselves...
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~weeeooo Apr 3, 2007
wow. :jawdrop:
it's beautiful.
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~DarkAngeLP26 Mar 18, 2007
wow very deep!
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~tRaNce-eMoTiOns Nov 23, 2006
nice one
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~9wingedxdreamer Oct 4, 2005  Student
though envoking poem....
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~jimmyw Aug 17, 2004
I hate that. No, I don't. :fav:
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~qwerty-dot-me Jun 4, 2004   Photographer
The words keep running up and down my spine and when I reach the last lines, it just seems to explode in my mind... WoW
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~Zayuri Apr 22, 2004
That's very touching. I like how you enfasize what you want to say and espress. It is very original :clap:
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